Trying to optimize a flash trigger

Yes, it works fine. I got the wiring for the photoresistor from a couple of tutorials. It is wired the same in all of them.
http://playground.arduino.cc/Learning/PhotoResistor
PhotoR 10K
+5 o---///--.--///---o GND
|
Pin 0 o-----------

There is a resistor after the photoresistor (immediately to the right of the resistor 10Kohm).
The X nodes are not linkek, I was having a hard time not having wires cross. This was my first attempt at tinyCAD.

Below are a couple of pictures Ive taken with it.