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ardly


Nothing to do with these or cDc
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How about some Haikus, three line poems, five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables;


First snow, then silence.
 This thousand dollar screen dies
 so beautifully.

"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

Thoughts

I am not
dying slowly. I am
falling from the sky
scraper.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly

Death it comes for me
so fast, so slow, so certain
I fall to meet it
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar



Mast Tragedy

The loss of
a raised flag
at full mast.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

Purpose

I write because I know
monkeys who write
enough...
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly


Ook ook ook ook ook
ooh AAAH AAAH AAAH
Ook ook ook ook ook.
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

ChrisTenone

One of the more sensible haikus I have ever read!
Atmosphere carries combustion vapors to places where they will do good instead of harm - Mike Faraday's 'History of a Candle': https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W0MHZ4jb4A

Whoops ::)

ardly


Chaos reigns within.
 Reflect, repent, and reboot.
 Order shall return.
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

Not a haikooooo, but I like reasons to post stuff I write.


Honesty

Attrition:

Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We aren't aren't saying playing
until we do. after.

We've crafted careful outs -
snarky innocents.

We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.

Your words bounce off me
and into your skull
like a bullet.

Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly

Not a haikooooo, but I like reasons to post stuff I write.


Honesty

Attrition:

Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We aren't aren't saying playing
until we do. after.

We've crafted careful outs -
snarky innocents.

We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.

Your words bounce off me
and into your skull
like a bullet.

Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.
Some of that works for me. I like your signature did you write it yourself?

I have been pulling the computer related haikus off the internet.
Writing them is hard work I cannot seem to get the discordant twist.
Here is one of my attempts;

small hand, big button
stable genius contemplates
yet another coke
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

#10
Feb 09, 2018, 08:12 pm Last Edit: Feb 09, 2018, 08:12 pm by Qdeathstar
Yes, everything I posted I have written. (And my sig)
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

#11
Feb 10, 2018, 03:43 pm Last Edit: Feb 10, 2018, 03:47 pm by Qdeathstar
Alright, last one....

Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat)

We are good like God.
Punishing the faithful with purpose
like Satan.

We have rights like King.
Dreaming up righteous mandates
like the Klan.

We give hope like Jesus.
Keeping faith in cult personalities
like Manson.

We are strong like Gandhi.
To defend the unspoken minority
like old Mao.

We still live like Buddha.
Awaiting our rebirth
like lost fools.



a reference
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly


Serious error.
 All shortcuts have disappeared.
 Screen. Mind. Both are blank.


"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

#13
Feb 12, 2018, 02:08 am Last Edit: Feb 12, 2018, 02:29 am by Qdeathstar
^^^Sometime thats not a bad thing :D

Information Age

Breaking news
happening overnight
murder by an illegal
searches on Google
stock's record profits
sent overseas
warfare in the Middle East
Coast prepares for Hurricanes
championship run
away killed by a drunk
pilot crashed at a Russian
president starts conflict
resolution this New Year's
holiday vacation home sales
training for a new career
politicians elected to represent
criminals vindicated by test-tube
babies born with the Zika virus
stole documents leaked to media
mistrust at record levels
new sanctions against Putin
says hacks were fake
news breaking.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly

Hitting ugly wall
Great American Eagle
reduced to tweeting
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

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