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Qdeathstar

#15
Feb 13, 2018, 01:44 am Last Edit: Feb 13, 2018, 01:45 am by Qdeathstar
The Long Falling In

Unending verdant fields and the twinkle of fireflies
spiral in orbit around a country cottage reflecting
the sun's rich amber on cedar siding at dusk
just before the atrophy of summer's afterglow.

Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.

Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness. 

Light meets darkness
as form softens.

A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.

singularity
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ChrisTenone

HA! You quite the poet QDS!
tanstaafl

Qdeathstar

#17
Feb 13, 2018, 03:19 am Last Edit: Feb 13, 2018, 03:20 am by Qdeathstar
I'm glad you like the poems.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly

HA! You quite the poet QDS!
Definitely multitalented; 3D printing, dog friendly doors and poesy.

Sadly not my own work;

Stay the patient course
 Of little worth is your ire
 The network is down
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

ardly


The code was willing,

It considered your request,

But the chips were weak.
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

ardly



Printer not ready.
Could be a fatal error.
Have a pen handy?
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

#21
Apr 22, 2018, 11:25 pm Last Edit: Apr 22, 2018, 11:27 pm by Qdeathstar
Aaron and Abe

Thought experiments never pay out.
There needs to be actualization.
You found it without facing causality.
You avoided it.

You could not avoid consequences though.

Loops stacked upon themselves
till the weight of your mistake
ended what you loved most.

You might recreate the past but you cannot undo regret.








https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primer_(film)
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

#22
Apr 22, 2018, 11:33 pm Last Edit: Apr 22, 2018, 11:35 pm by Qdeathstar
The Men On Trains

A sweaty invisible man drifts
toward the roar of subway trains.
Perspiration rolls down his face,
or tears, perhaps.

Finally he has a purpose.

يا إلهي ، خذني


A cold stern man sits uncomfortably
in the stench of humanity.
His blank stare diverted to a crazed
migrant yelling what he will not understand.

Finally he feels unrelenting warmth.
 
Oh god, save me.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

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