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Qdeathstar

#15
Feb 13, 2018, 01:44 am Last Edit: Feb 13, 2018, 01:45 am by Qdeathstar
The Long Falling In

Unending verdant fields and the twinkle of fireflies
spiral in orbit around a country cottage reflecting
the sun's rich amber on cedar siding at dusk
just before the atrophy of summer's afterglow.

Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.

Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness. 

Light meets darkness
as form softens.

A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.

singularity
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ChrisTenone

HA! You quite the poet QDS!
I'm not disparaging the differently abled. I'm stating the fact that thirty years of junior college has made me mentally retarded.

Qdeathstar

#17
Feb 13, 2018, 03:19 am Last Edit: Feb 13, 2018, 03:20 am by Qdeathstar
I'm glad you like the poems.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly

HA! You quite the poet QDS!
Definitely multitalented; 3D printing, dog friendly doors and poesy.

Sadly not my own work;

Stay the patient course
 Of little worth is your ire
 The network is down
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

ardly


The code was willing,

It considered your request,

But the chips were weak.
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

ardly



Printer not ready.
Could be a fatal error.
Have a pen handy?
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

#21
Apr 22, 2018, 11:25 pm Last Edit: Apr 22, 2018, 11:27 pm by Qdeathstar
Aaron and Abe

Thought experiments never pay out.
There needs to be actualization.
You found it without facing causality.
You avoided it.

You could not avoid consequences though.

Loops stacked upon themselves
till the weight of your mistake
ended what you loved most.

You might recreate the past but you cannot undo regret.








https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primer_(film)
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

#22
Apr 22, 2018, 11:33 pm Last Edit: Apr 22, 2018, 11:35 pm by Qdeathstar
The Men On Trains

A sweaty invisible man drifts
toward the roar of subway trains.
Perspiration rolls down his face,
or tears, perhaps.

Finally he has a purpose.

يا إلهي ، خذني


A cold stern man sits uncomfortably
in the stench of humanity.
His blank stare diverted to a crazed
migrant yelling what he will not understand.

Finally he feels unrelenting warmth.
 
Oh god, save me.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

#23
Jul 23, 2018, 04:44 am Last Edit: Jul 23, 2018, 04:44 am by Qdeathstar
For DaveInNJ


Nothing

How easily I surrender my thoughts to flashes,
forgoing real meaning for bangs and lights blinking;
Prompted to press "a" my tired thumb bashes.
How easily I surrender my thoughts to flashes.
Texting with one eye while the other avoids crashes.
Someday i'll drift clear past center line while thinking
how easily I surrender my thoughts to flashes,
forgoing real meaning for bangs and lights blinking.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ChrisTenone

You channelling Leonard Cohen Qds?
I'm not disparaging the differently abled. I'm stating the fact that thirty years of junior college has made me mentally retarded.

ardly

You channelling Leonard Cohen Qds?
Damn, I could not figure out what Qds stood for.
Went through the Leonard Cohen playlist, looked up the latin "quater die sumendus".


Finally the penny dropped with a bang and realisation flashed.

Obviously a Monday morning and brain not functioning.


"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

I'm pretty sure when it's all over, I will sigh eternally.... so, maybe.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ChrisTenone

I should have put the comma in.  :(
I'm not disparaging the differently abled. I'm stating the fact that thirty years of junior college has made me mentally retarded.

Qdeathstar

#28
Aug 03, 2018, 05:21 am Last Edit: Aug 03, 2018, 05:25 am by Qdeathstar
Heritage

Six years ago my son shot up his last string of heroin
smuggled here from some South-American shithole.

And she's all I have left. My sweet girl - jailbait for unwanted
undocumented gang-bangers living tax free on my dime.

And I have to protect her. Sharia law is coming, believe me.
They said 9/11 couldn't happen but the planes still crashed.

And I have to be proud for her. So I stand for my country.
Soon as the truck fixed up i'll fly the stripes and stars.

And America has to be great for her. So i'll settle down
for a little slumber so I won't have to see her disgrace.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

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