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Title: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 05, 2018, 04:30 pm

Nothing to do with these or cDc
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How about some Haikus, three line poems, five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables;


First snow, then silence.
 This thousand dollar screen dies
 so beautifully.

Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 05, 2018, 04:41 pm
Thoughts

I am not
dying slowly. I am
falling from the sky
scraper.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 05, 2018, 05:04 pm
Death it comes for me
so fast, so slow, so certain
I fall to meet it
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 05, 2018, 05:28 pm
(http://cdn.history.com/sites/2/2013/12/42-22343897.jpg)

Mast Tragedy

The loss of
a raised flag
at full mast.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 06, 2018, 01:21 am
Purpose

I write because I know
monkeys who write
enough...
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 06, 2018, 09:59 am

Ook ook ook ook ook
ooh AAAH AAAH AAAH
Ook ook ook ook ook.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ChrisTenone on Feb 07, 2018, 10:48 am
One of the more sensible haikus I have ever read!
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 07, 2018, 12:24 pm

Chaos reigns within.
 Reflect, repent, and reboot.
 Order shall return.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 08, 2018, 08:13 pm
Not a haikooooo, but I like reasons to post stuff I write.


Honesty

Attrition:

Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We aren't aren't saying playing
until we do. after.

We've crafted careful outs -
snarky innocents.

We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.

Your words bounce off me
and into your skull
like a bullet.

Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 09, 2018, 05:18 pm
Not a haikooooo, but I like reasons to post stuff I write.


Honesty

Attrition:

Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We aren't aren't saying playing
until we do. after.

We've crafted careful outs -
snarky innocents.

We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.

Your words bounce off me
and into your skull
like a bullet.

Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.
Some of that works for me. I like your signature did you write it yourself?

I have been pulling the computer related haikus off the internet.
Writing them is hard work I cannot seem to get the discordant twist.
Here is one of my attempts;

small hand, big button
stable genius contemplates
yet another coke
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 09, 2018, 08:12 pm
Yes, everything I posted I have written. (And my sig)
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 10, 2018, 03:43 pm
Alright, last one....

Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat)

We are good like God.
Punishing the faithful with purpose
like Satan.

We have rights like King.
Dreaming up righteous mandates
like the Klan.

We give hope like Jesus.
Keeping faith in cult personalities
like Manson.

We are strong like Gandhi.
To defend the unspoken minority
like old Mao.

We still live like Buddha.
Awaiting our rebirth
like lost fools.



a reference (https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Black_Cat_(short_story))
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 11, 2018, 06:28 pm

Serious error.
 All shortcuts have disappeared.
 Screen. Mind. Both are blank.


Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 12, 2018, 02:08 am
^^^Sometime thats not a bad thing :D

Information Age

Breaking news
happening overnight
murder by an illegal
searches on Google
stock's record profits
sent overseas
warfare in the Middle East
Coast prepares for Hurricanes
championship run
away killed by a drunk
pilot crashed at a Russian
president starts conflict
resolution this New Year's
holiday vacation home sales
training for a new career
politicians elected to represent
criminals vindicated by test-tube
babies born with the Zika virus
stole documents leaked to media
mistrust at record levels
new sanctions against Putin
says hacks were fake
news breaking.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 12, 2018, 10:00 am
Hitting ugly wall
Great American Eagle
reduced to tweeting
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 13, 2018, 01:44 am
The Long Falling In

Unending verdant fields and the twinkle of fireflies
spiral in orbit around a country cottage reflecting
the sun's rich amber on cedar siding at dusk
just before the atrophy of summer's afterglow.

Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.

Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness. 

Light meets darkness
as form softens.

A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.

singularity
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ChrisTenone on Feb 13, 2018, 03:06 am
HA! You quite the poet QDS!
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Feb 13, 2018, 03:19 am
I'm glad you like the poems.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 13, 2018, 11:40 am
HA! You quite the poet QDS!
Definitely multitalented; 3D printing, dog friendly doors and poesy.

Sadly not my own work;

Stay the patient course
 Of little worth is your ire
 The network is down
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 16, 2018, 12:24 pm

The code was willing,

It considered your request,

But the chips were weak.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Feb 19, 2018, 12:04 pm


Printer not ready.
Could be a fatal error.
Have a pen handy?
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Apr 22, 2018, 11:25 pm
Aaron and Abe

Thought experiments never pay out.
There needs to be actualization.
You found it without facing causality.
You avoided it.

You could not avoid consequences though.

Loops stacked upon themselves
till the weight of your mistake
ended what you loved most.

You might recreate the past but you cannot undo regret.








https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primer_(film)
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Apr 22, 2018, 11:33 pm
The Men On Trains

A sweaty invisible man drifts
toward the roar of subway trains.
Perspiration rolls down his face,
or tears, perhaps.

Finally he has a purpose.

يا إلهي ، خذني


A cold stern man sits uncomfortably
in the stench of humanity.
His blank stare diverted to a crazed
migrant yelling what he will not understand.

Finally he feels unrelenting warmth.
 
Oh god, save me.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Jul 23, 2018, 04:44 am
For DaveInNJ


Nothing

How easily I surrender my thoughts to flashes,
forgoing real meaning for bangs and lights blinking;
Prompted to press "a" my tired thumb bashes.
How easily I surrender my thoughts to flashes.
Texting with one eye while the other avoids crashes.
Someday i'll drift clear past center line while thinking
how easily I surrender my thoughts to flashes,
forgoing real meaning for bangs and lights blinking.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ChrisTenone on Jul 23, 2018, 08:35 am
You channelling Leonard Cohen Qds?
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Jul 23, 2018, 12:55 pm
You channelling Leonard Cohen Qds?
Damn, I could not figure out what Qds stood for.
Went through the Leonard Cohen playlist, looked up the latin "quater die sumendus".


Finally the penny dropped with a bang and realisation flashed.

Obviously a Monday morning and brain not functioning.


Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Jul 23, 2018, 03:54 pm
I'm pretty sure when it's all over, I will sigh eternally.... so, maybe.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ChrisTenone on Jul 24, 2018, 06:56 am
I should have put the comma in.  :(
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Aug 03, 2018, 05:21 am
Heritage

Six years ago my son shot up his last string of heroin
smuggled here from some South-American shithole.

And she's all I have left. My sweet girl - jailbait for unwanted
undocumented gang-bangers living tax free on my dime.

And I have to protect her. Sharia law is coming, believe me.
They said 9/11 couldn't happen but the planes still crashed.

And I have to be proud for her. So I stand for my country.
Soon as the truck fixed up i'll fly the stripes and stars.

And America has to be great for her. So i'll settle down
for a little slumber so I won't have to see her disgrace.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Nov 19, 2018, 03:48 pm
Is it possible to write Haikus in Hawaiian?
Just writing "Oumuamua" seems to use up five syllables.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Nov 27, 2018, 01:48 pm
On Desiring The Recreation Of The Freedom Of A Shotgun - 1994

Pins and needles scatter light
from crevices of sunshine crawling
through brown shades of dust.

How many times can thirty
days be cast aside - secrets in a dresser
collected - regrets in a cigar box
unkept?

Pins and needles wage a fight
over the love for self destruction
against the righteousness of life.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Oct 12, 2019, 05:18 am
Little Bit

Dear it's quite clear you're like a lemon drop

You're the kind of candy that sticks
hard shell gone soft - stuck in mouth

You're the kind of candy that tricks
with a two toned taste - a little bitter

You're the kind of candy that sits -
bottom of the dish - just sweet enough

Like a lemon drop
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: microcat on Oct 12, 2019, 06:04 am
My lame attempt...

Some folks enjoy the roses.
Some folks fear the thorns.
Soon there will be neither.

Who will regret
Life?
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Oct 12, 2019, 03:56 pm
The goal is to keep trying
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: ardly on Oct 15, 2019, 11:36 am
The goal is to keep trying
Meow,
I thought @microcat's was good.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Oct 15, 2019, 01:54 pm
i didn't mean to be rude, my point is you keep writing and if your lucky one of your shit poems isn't shit. So i keep trying. No offense made. It wasn't s comment on his poem, but on his "lame attempt comment". They are all lame attempts. But not his, personally.
Title: Re: Hi coos
Post by: Qdeathstar on Oct 20, 2019, 05:57 am
I went the latest Trump rally
to greet my deplorable sally
but things went south quick
when he pulled out his dick
and giggled "i'm a lib from cali!"