Thanks Pancake for the additional clarity on the zener, I do think I get it in isolation (check me!), but not certain how to use it in the circuit.
Can I start from the beginning and get help to build from there?
So, the board input is trigger low. That means I need to connect the signal of the board to ground for it to trigger. (This is at least one thing I forgot in the original schematic, wherein I was trying to deliver 5v to the signal input) There is an internal pullup enabled, so it's high and nominally off.
In case A from your picture, which is the configuration dlloyd drew also, when the Vin is <5 then the zener is closed and the signal input is isolated from ground by the zener so the board input remains untriggered.
Then, when Vin>5, the zener breaks down and current flows from Vin to gnd through the zener. Is it true also that in such configuration current also flows from the signal input to gnd, (or at least it's shorted to ground) i.e the board input will trigger?
*If* that is true then comes the next problem. (if not true, please help me see what I'm missing!)
The drop between the sensor and ground is 24v when it is not sensing, so the zener would be open and the board input would see ground and so will be triggered. When the sensor is sensing, due to it's position in the circuit, the drop from the sensor output changes from 24v to its reference, which is actually 14v from board ground. At this potential, the zener is still in avalance, and so the input is still connected to ground, and still triggered. So, the input is always triggered regardless of the state of the sensor. That's the issue I'm trying to resolve. (granted of course I'm understanding correctly above)