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Qdeathstar

On Desiring The Recreation Of The Freedom Of A Shotgun - 1994

Pins and needles scatter light
from crevices of sunshine crawling
through brown shades of dust.

How many times can thirty
days be cast aside - secrets in a dresser
collected - regrets in a cigar box
unkept?

Pins and needles wage a fight
over the love for self destruction
against the righteousness of life.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

Little Bit

Dear it's quite clear you're like a lemon drop

You're the kind of candy that sticks
hard shell gone soft - stuck in mouth

You're the kind of candy that tricks
with a two toned taste - a little bitter

You're the kind of candy that sits -
bottom of the dish - just sweet enough

Like a lemon drop
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

microcat

My lame attempt...

Some folks enjoy the roses.
Some folks fear the thorns.
Soon there will be neither.

Who will regret
Life?

Qdeathstar

The goal is to keep trying
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

ardly

The goal is to keep trying
Meow,
I thought @microcat's was good.
"Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored" - Aldous Huxley

Qdeathstar

#35
Oct 15, 2019, 01:54 pm Last Edit: Oct 15, 2019, 01:54 pm by Qdeathstar
i didn't mean to be rude, my point is you keep writing and if your lucky one of your shit poems isn't shit. So i keep trying. No offense made. It wasn't s comment on his poem, but on his "lame attempt comment". They are all lame attempts. But not his, personally.
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

Qdeathstar

I went the latest Trump rally
to greet my deplorable sally
but things went south quick
when he pulled out his dick
and giggled "i'm a lib from cali!"
A creaking creeping shadow
stiff against the freezing fog
glares at a tickless watch.

Time has failed him -- all things shall pass.

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