Hello,
I am from germany and my frind writes a CV and used the folloring sentens as introduction:
"To challenge the coordinator position or obtain the role in any related areas where I can utilize and contribute my l knowledge and communication skills in the organization offering various job responsibilities."
I think this is not correct. Perhaps someone of you can say is it correct or not and correct it.
well - first of all, its a typical german english sentence. in german it can be acceptable to write super long sentences like that, but in english you should try to avoid it.
also, the sentence does not make any sense - it just goes on without saying anything. you would expect something like. "My big wish is to challenge the coordinator position."
But why would you want to challenge a position? that does not make much sense either...
What are you trying to say?
There are lots of forums for this type of question though - this seems quite off topic - even for the bar sports.
O.k. thank you. I also don't know what he wants to say. But he wouldn't belive me.
"Challenge" might mean "to be challenged by" which are different ideas or concepts. Let's play with the language...
"To challenge the coordinator position or obtain the role in any related areas where I can utilize and contribute my l knowledge and communication skills in the organization offering various job responsibilities."
Becomes...
"To work in a challenging position as coordinator or a similar open position that [insert organization name here] may find my skills effective. To leverage my knowledge and communication skills to meet goals and exceed expectations that [insert organization name here] has created for this job position."
Note: If this is a British English speaking country it should end as "[insert organization name here] have created for this job position." - they treat companies as plural rather than as singular, silly Brits.
I think this is what is basically being said. Anyone else want a crack or maybe clean this up?
"To challenge the coordinator position or obtain the role in any related areas where I can utilize and contribute my l knowledge and communication skills in the organization offering various job responsibilities."
Maybe like this:
"In this challenging coordinator position, I can apply my knowledge and communication skills, and can contribute to the completion of projects in your organization."
It is difficult to find out what he wants to say, but that's my guess. Not sure, though.