Learning the language....

Ok, I looked it over. I am at a loss. I know I am not writing it correctly, but, I cannot figure out what I hsvr to do to make it correct. I thank you for tasking me, and such, but, I want to learn quicker. Please, at the risk of sounding completely stupid, just tell me what my mistakes were. I learn faste that way.

Many Thanks...

Retired_Phart... lol!!!