For the last year I've managed to make a tiny open source project based on Arduino. Though it's open source, I'm going to recover some expenses by selling complete devices. I've made a web site, but before I share this project with wider community I need help.
I'm from Ukraine, so English is not my native language. My friend corrected my English, but I'm not sure whether I haven't done some obvious mistakes. As I read it again and again, it looks naive to me.
Could someone make a proof read of a page or two of the project website, please? Do you think something should be changed? Thank you!
Details page
To sound more natural I’d replace:
“9 LED candles flickering and going out when you’re blowing on them”
With:
“9 LED candles flicker and go out when you blow on them”
I’d also replace:
“air trap hole”
With
Either: “air trap” OR “air hole”
This line contains an unreadable character (with Windows setup for English )
Size 42 x 42 x 18 mm, weight 30?g
This line contains TWO unreadable characters
Ulta low shutdown current (<1??A in deep shutdown)
Order page
Replace
“Write me email to order@bitcake.eu …”
With:
“Send email to order@bitcake.eu …”
Just Remove:
(which I’ll ask at the post office) (sounds very amateur)
Replace:
“Write me again and specify your address and the payment method details”
With:
“Contact me once payment has been made to confirm details”
