Speed Calculator Project

So the idea is to create a system that can detect either directions first so I could tell where the vehicle is coming from (i.e which direction), the speed, and vehicles/min. But back to the original question, would the code below effectively work in my scenario.

void loop() {
  
  lcd.setCursor(0,0);

  analogVal = analogRead(analogPin);
  delay(10);
  digitalVal = digitalRead(digitalPin);
  delay(10);
  
  if (analogVal <= 400 || analogVal >= 600) {
    
        t0 = micros();
        String message1 = "Analog Detected";
        Serial.println(message1);
        
        timeout0 = millis(); //timestamp for delay
        
        if ((millis() - timeout0) > 400){ // wait 400ms until Analog Pin is LOW
        
        newAnalog = analogRead(analogPin); // check to see motion is done
        newAnalogVal = newAnalog + 500; // absolute value idea
                
            if (newAnalogVal < 600){ //check case to see if analogRead is below 600
            }
        }
        
        computeData_0();
  }
 
    
  else if (digitalVal == HIGH) {
        
        String message2 = "Digital Detected";
        Serial.println(message2);
        t1 = micros(); //timestamp for calulating speed, concentration
        timeout1 = millis(); //timestamp for delay
        
        if ((millis()  - timeout1) > 400){ // wait 400ms until Digital Pin is LOW
        
        newDigital = digitalRead(digitalPin); // Check to see that digital sensor is done detecting
          
          if (newDigital == LOW){ // Once LOW, compute our data    
          }
          
    }
          computeData_1();  
}

So my if ((millis() - timeout1) > 400){ should keep taking a timestamp until its greater than 400ms then sample the analogRead/digitalRead pins to see if the sensor is still HIGH or in the analog case over the the threshold voltage. Once LOW or below my threshold, I go into my computeData() function which computes a bunch of data.

Is this correct in my thinking? Will the above code do this?