Transistor using HV to switch 5v

So i didn't have enough components to try it out, so a order to mouser for 2 optocouplers and 4 3k 2 watt resistors, along with some other random stuff i thought i might need. I drew up a circuit that i would like to bread board and scope the output of the Vo on the optocoupler, so i can move on with the project.

Question:

Please review the Circuit to make sure i have everything right.

Notes:

This is on a golf cart, power is cut every time the pedal is released, problem?

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