The pencil drawing used bi-polar power supplies... The Grounded + input will give you some problems trying to realize that circuit... one other point... the symbols you use for the op-amps are grossly incorrect... use the right ones, they were created for a reason. Rather than being able to see at a glance what is intended your drawing has to be interpreted. and much was lost in your interpretation.
If your schematic tool won't reproduce the correct symbol, find one that will. IMO
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