Slow reaction time using Arudino Pro Mini with NRF24L01 Transceivers

Well, the UNO and Pro Mini are the same processor, appart from the UNO not having pins A6 and A7 connected, so the code will be the same.

Which suggests you have some sort of wiring error or have them wired up differently ?

Where are you getting the 3.3V supplies for the NRF24 devices from ?

Try the tutorial here to prove your devices are working;

Note in particular the power supply requirements.