Problem interfacing with VC0706 JPEG Serial Camera

work with RS232 protocol, therefore you must convert them to TTL protocol

Yes except you are using the wrong word, what you mean is “hardware standard” not “protocol “. A protocol is system of actions or messages used to communicate and is defined in your software alone.

I know that my soldering skill is ridiculous

It looks like it is your iron not you that is ridiculous not you. It is not getting hot enough to make a proper joint.

2- please, inform me if my solution works

Well I think you have to inform us if it works, but if you have RS232 signal levels you do have to convert them to TTL levels.